Chapter 18

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In cell 23, Zuhdi develops a painful bout of constipation. His fellow inmates, led by the ideologically‑obsessed Adil al‑Karmi, repeatedly tease him with vegetable prescriptions and force him to listen to political lectures. Zuhdi, agitated, throws aside Naguib Mahfouz’s Midaq Alley and retreats to a corner, overwhelmed by headache and loneliness. He watches other prisoners—Mahmoud the old peasant, a Syrian guerrilla, and others—perform evening exercises, while the younger inmates lift makeshift concrete weights wrapped in blankets.

A disciplinary council is convened after Mahmoud is found hoarding soup. The Syrian guerrilla is ordered to enforce the sentence but hesitates; both he and Mahmoud receive beatings during a “celebration” amid rattling dishes and back‑gammon boards. Adil, proclaiming himself the “conscience” of the Palestinian revolution, presides over the council, revealing his cold, authoritarian streak.

Later, a group of prisoners—Zuhdi, the Syrian guerrilla, Abu Salim, and others—prepare a primitive tea using two buckets, a jam tin suspended on a broom handle, and shreds of egg‑box as fuel. While they sip, each looks into his cup and describes a personal vision: Zuhdi sees his wife kneading dough; the Syrian sees a child named Nidal; they exchange stories about love, resistance, and sacrifice. Adil inserts his own political commentary, equating personal struggle with class struggle, but the others remain absorbed in the imagined scenes.

The narrative shifts to Shlomo, whose head bursts open, symbolizing the violent fate of many inmates. The text reflects on Shlomo’s humanity and the absurdity of endless factory production, contrasting it with the prisoners’ stagnant lives. Discussions recur about the expendability of life for the nation, Marxist doctrine, and the paradox of hunger and constipation uniting opposites.

The Syrian guerrilla offers Zuhdi hot tea, trying to lift his spirits, while acknowledging his loneliness and the prospect of a future family visit. Mahmoud interjects with news of Masouda’s dead white calf, adding a layer of everyday sorrow. The dialogue moves to plans for a chicken and onion meal promised by a fellow inmate’s wife, which Adil will distribute according to “socialist” principles.

Throughout, Adil’s authoritarian control intensifies; he claims to allocate food portions, echoing socialist rhetoric, while the prisoners gossip about the Red Cross, the occupation’s impact on health care (e.g., Abu Sabir’s lost hand), and the futility of resistance when basic needs are unmet. The chapter ends with Zuhdi’s desperate rush to the toilet after hearing that relief is on the way, underscoring his physical and existential entrapment.