Chapter Twenty-Eight

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The chapter opens with the narrator sitting on a window seat, describing the hot, humid afternoon and recalling conversations with Moira about the Commander, Luke, and past friendships. She narrates the national catastrophe—shootings of the President and Congress, the suspension of the Constitution, the imposition of roadblocks, Identipasses, and the closure of pornomarts and other services.

She goes to a corner store to buy cigarettes; a young male clerk cannot process her Compucard, repeatedly flashing a red error light despite the correct number, and she leaves without paying. Later, at her library job “discing” books onto computer discs, the director bursts in, drunk and apologetic, and announces that—“it’s the law”—all staff must be let go. As he speaks, two uniformed men with machine guns appear, forcing the staff to gather their belongings and leave within ten minutes.

Returning home, she finds Luke at work and her daughter at school; she wanders the house, touching objects, drinks milk, and attempts to call her mother and Moira. Moira finally answers later, having joined a women’s collective that publishes birth‑control and rape literature. Moira informs her that all Compucards have been frozen (marked with an “F”), that a new law now bars women from holding property, and that any remaining accounts will be transferred to a husband or male next‑of‑kin.

The narrator describes a conversation with Luke, who tries to reassure her that the situation is temporary, but their physical intimacy is lacking; she feels reduced to a “doll” and questions the meaning of their relationship. She reflects on past protests—abortion riots, bombings, and police crackdowns—recalling her mother’s involvement and the bruises from those events.

Finally, Nick, a young Guardian, appears at the house, described in detail (tall, stooped, dark hair, acne). The narrator observes his interactions at the corner store earlier and now speculates about his role in the Commander’s household, his possible involvement in illicit activities, and his feelings toward the narrator. The chapter ends with the narrator’s internal monologue questioning whether she was right about Luke and their relationship, expressing fear of losing him, and contemplating the oppressive new laws.